On Monday 3rd May the Minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story on a fishing experience . We are learning to be interesting writers by usinglots of adjetives and details. We have learnt to get straight into the action. I think my story is really good with lots of details and adjectives. To in prove my writing next time I will put some little stores in my writing.
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ReplyDeletePayton you need to download the scanned copy of your story please, and download it as an image onto this post.
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