
lots of adjetives and details. We have learnt to get straight into the action. I think my story is really good with lots of details and adjectives. To in prove my writing next time I will put some little stores in my writing.
Hi my name is Payton. I am 8 years old and I am in lc 10. I have 1 sister and 1 brother and a mum and dad. I am the oldest child in my family.